Ugh. [He can't help a grimace, though it's mostly good-natured.] He took so many! [...wait, that implies there were lots of instances where he looked like a mess.] I mean, he should've been focused on the fight! I might not be in a mess if he shot wherever it came from first.
[Or if he didn't warp headlong into battle first when none of the others can do the same and get himself surrounded all the time...]
no subject
[Or if he didn't warp headlong into battle first when none of the others can do the same and get himself surrounded all the time...]